Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Every Time I Visit the Children From my former Work, I Get Inspired To Dream...


Children III

 

                                    Intrigued understanding radiating from their eyes.
                                    Innocent poise blends subconscious non sense
                                    into realities moments. Coherent confusion weaves
                                    the fabric of our dreams and creates serenity.

Thursday, March 21, 2013

Zero Character Development Destroys the Novel "Blood Money."


“Blah Money” would have been a more appropriate title for the novel “Blood Money”.

New York Times best-selling author James Grippando completely ignored character development in the January release of “Blood Money,” thus earning a one star rating.

Not a single individual in “Blood Money,” was remotely interesting, thus sending all conflicts and resolution into a pit of oblivion.

The main character Jack Swyteck, a defense attorney returns for the 10th time in Grippando’s 20th novel.

Maybe Swyteck has an ounce of flare and spark in the nine other books he’s featured in, but in “Blood Money” Swyteck is as absorbing as a dead fly in an abandoned attic.

Sydney Bennett, the woman Swyteck defends for the alleged murder of her two-year-old daughter Emma is equally boring and uninteresting.

Had Grippando put any thought at all into character development, “Blood Money” would have been a good if not great novel.

The intense conflicts are well planned and executed. Bennett has the reputation of a heartless party girl who murdered her own daughter for money. Did Bennett kill her daughter? How can Swyteck defend such a heatless wench?

On top of all this going on in the book college student Celeste Laramore is beaten into a coma by a mob of outraged citizens because they thought she was Bennett who was found innocent of all charges against her.

Did Swyteck and his posse arrange a Bennett look-alike contest and have Laramore outside the court room upon Bennett’s verdict of not guilty so Bennett could avoid an angry mob? Was Bennett guilty of child abuse, neglect and murder, promised a book deal and did she pay off the jury with promised future money? If you haven’t already guessed there is a lot going on in this book and the plot is indeed filled with intrigue and cerebral arousal.

Despite a barrage of happenings in “Blood Money,” the conflicts are neatly concluded for a solid story. Unfortunately every individual in the novel was no more interesting then dried leaves in a debris box.        

College Basketball Takes Center Stage in American Sports Now


Basketball

 

Ten commandments, the rim is ten feet high.

Five business days a week, five players per side.

Two days in a week end, two points per

basket. Three day weekends, three point

shots and plays. Net profit, nothing but net.

Round sun, round ball. Out of time, fouled out. No

football or baseball in March; march madness.
 
                                           Mark Izzy Schurr

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Back in the Day, Mark (Izzy) Schurr


Cops and robbers, cowboys and Indians. Toy soldiers
and deathless wars. Putting frogs in her lunch box,
kindergarten delights. Recess and gram crackers,
blue horses and green skies-coloring books. Short
pants and cowboy boots. Big wheels and happy meals.
Innocence untarnished. Mud pies and summer skies,
my how time flies...

Friday, March 1, 2013

Baseball

Bears wake in the spring, flowers bloom and
open hearts embrace love. Baseball begins,
it’s unique because the defense has the ball.
The ball is round, the Earth is round.
Winter, spring, summer and fall, three months
per season, three outs per half inning. Four seasons,
four balls for a free base.
Nine months in the womb. Nine innings per game.
Sometimes late births, sometimes extra innings.
Warm summer nights and stadium lights.
Ball games and barbeques. Life and death.
Safe and out.
Fall begins in the ninth month. Nine players
per team take the field.
Fall foliage. Fall classic. Winter season. off season.

Izzy Schurr, aka Mark Schurr