Thursday, March 21, 2013

Zero Character Development Destroys the Novel "Blood Money."


“Blah Money” would have been a more appropriate title for the novel “Blood Money”.

New York Times best-selling author James Grippando completely ignored character development in the January release of “Blood Money,” thus earning a one star rating.

Not a single individual in “Blood Money,” was remotely interesting, thus sending all conflicts and resolution into a pit of oblivion.

The main character Jack Swyteck, a defense attorney returns for the 10th time in Grippando’s 20th novel.

Maybe Swyteck has an ounce of flare and spark in the nine other books he’s featured in, but in “Blood Money” Swyteck is as absorbing as a dead fly in an abandoned attic.

Sydney Bennett, the woman Swyteck defends for the alleged murder of her two-year-old daughter Emma is equally boring and uninteresting.

Had Grippando put any thought at all into character development, “Blood Money” would have been a good if not great novel.

The intense conflicts are well planned and executed. Bennett has the reputation of a heartless party girl who murdered her own daughter for money. Did Bennett kill her daughter? How can Swyteck defend such a heatless wench?

On top of all this going on in the book college student Celeste Laramore is beaten into a coma by a mob of outraged citizens because they thought she was Bennett who was found innocent of all charges against her.

Did Swyteck and his posse arrange a Bennett look-alike contest and have Laramore outside the court room upon Bennett’s verdict of not guilty so Bennett could avoid an angry mob? Was Bennett guilty of child abuse, neglect and murder, promised a book deal and did she pay off the jury with promised future money? If you haven’t already guessed there is a lot going on in this book and the plot is indeed filled with intrigue and cerebral arousal.

Despite a barrage of happenings in “Blood Money,” the conflicts are neatly concluded for a solid story. Unfortunately every individual in the novel was no more interesting then dried leaves in a debris box.        

College Basketball Takes Center Stage in American Sports Now


Basketball

 

Ten commandments, the rim is ten feet high.

Five business days a week, five players per side.

Two days in a week end, two points per

basket. Three day weekends, three point

shots and plays. Net profit, nothing but net.

Round sun, round ball. Out of time, fouled out. No

football or baseball in March; march madness.
 
                                           Mark Izzy Schurr

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Back in the Day, Mark (Izzy) Schurr


Cops and robbers, cowboys and Indians. Toy soldiers
and deathless wars. Putting frogs in her lunch box,
kindergarten delights. Recess and gram crackers,
blue horses and green skies-coloring books. Short
pants and cowboy boots. Big wheels and happy meals.
Innocence untarnished. Mud pies and summer skies,
my how time flies...

Friday, March 1, 2013

Baseball

Bears wake in the spring, flowers bloom and
open hearts embrace love. Baseball begins,
it’s unique because the defense has the ball.
The ball is round, the Earth is round.
Winter, spring, summer and fall, three months
per season, three outs per half inning. Four seasons,
four balls for a free base.
Nine months in the womb. Nine innings per game.
Sometimes late births, sometimes extra innings.
Warm summer nights and stadium lights.
Ball games and barbeques. Life and death.
Safe and out.
Fall begins in the ninth month. Nine players
per team take the field.
Fall foliage. Fall classic. Winter season. off season.

Izzy Schurr, aka Mark Schurr

Saturday, February 23, 2013

The book December's Thorn" is Blissfully Bizarre

"December's Thorn" sticks the imagination into a fraternity of dreamers and successfully blends chaos and confusion into a delectable cocktail of magnificent madness.

Award winning novelist Phillip DePoy's January release of the book "December's Thorn" marries fantasy with reality in a three star fashion. "December’s Thorn" is the seventh book in the Fever Devilin series. In DePoy’s latest tail, Devilin dwells in a fugue state; a state in which a person can move and talk, but is not completely aware of the real world.

Devilin has been in a coma for three months. Over the course of eight or nine years he claims he has been killed several times, legally dead twice, seen ghosts, witches, time travelers, racist murders and an Albino dwarf.

Devilin knows none of the above is true. Before his fiancee Lucinda Foxe can celebrate her man’s sanity, he claims a ghost women is visiting him. Issie, the ghost woman tells Devilin of their past life and marriage together. Issie also claims they have a son whose still alive. Foxe brings her friend Dr. Ceridwen Nelson to live with Devilin for psychiatric observation.

With just Nelson and Devilin and his house a young boy fires real bullets through the kitchen window. The local sheriff, Skidmore get’s involved. Nelson also starts seeing the ghost Issie. As DePoy’s words swirl swiftly page after page the questions mount. Is Nelson a real psychiatrist? Are Nelson and Devilin both whangdoodled? Are they falling in love? Is reality fiction and fiction reality?

If you haven’t already guessed "December’s Thorn" is a story that would have made Rod Serling, the creator of the 50s and 60s television show the "Twilight Zone" very proud.

The conclusion is neat and tidy and for everything that went on in this Novel, that’s very impressive. As the story thickens, the reader is engulfed in curiosity. Should or does Devilin leave his wife for her best friend foxe? Is the boy who shot at Devilin really his son? Is Devilin simply imagining all this? For the record, the story is not a dream and the conclusion is succinct and well executed.

Like most books it was slow in the middle with pointless details, but it's compellingly and unique story along with solid character development made it a fantastic read. I never read any of the previous six Devilin novels and "December's thorn" was still easy to comprehend.

For more details on "December's Thorn" and the author DePoy you can check out his web site; www.phillipdepoy.com.

Saturday, February 16, 2013

Latest "Die Hard" Movie is a Miserable Mess.

The fifth installment of the the "Die Hard" movie series, "A Good Day to Die" is mediocre at best, earning a one star rating.

I haven't seen any of the previous four "Die Hard" movies, but if those movies are anything like the Valentines Day release of the futile fifth, I haven't missed a thing.

Supposedly this movie is an action comedy. The comedy is drab and disastrously dry. The action is redundant and over the top with extremely bad camera work. I've seen better film on teeth. I got that line from the movie "Get Shorty."

John McClane (Bruce Willis), a New York cop leaves the Big Apple to find his son Jack (Jai Courtney), who's living in Moscow. His son Jack is a spy working undercover to protect Komarov (Sebastian Koch) who has a hidden file to bring down the ones who covered up the 80s Chernobyl disaster.

The pathetically predicable plot yields one unique twist, but by this point the movie is a perfect sleeping aide for insomniacs. As I stated earlier the action is over the top. A military war head is fired into heavy traffic with no injuries nor fatalities, the two McClanes are both pounded hard in the face with the butt of a rifle and feel no pain. Without ducking the two run threw machine gun fire from a Russian military helicopter. As countless bullets hurl through glass and other debris, the two jump out of a sky scraper falling several floors through scaffolding and surprise, just a few minor cuts a scrapes.

The unavailing sentiment between father and son is as believable as a truthful government.

Astonishingly, the bad guys lose and the good guys win. The best part of this movie is the end credits with the Rolling Stones song "Doom and Gloom" announcing a much needed conclusion to a movie that should have never been made.

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

The Romantic Novel "Shiver" Delivers Delicous Desires

The novel "Shiver" is a three star first class romantic thriller which thrusts evil upon the wholesome at heart, casting the emotions of love and lust into a theater of tension and joyous wonder.
Author Karen Robards has written more than 40 New York Times best sellers, why "Shiver" released in December is not one of them is a mystery to me. "Shiver" illustrates human natures thirst for success, yearning for love and desire for passionate pleasures.
Samantha Jones is a 23-year-old single mom working the mean streets of her town as a tow-truck driver. Jones is a repo woman who repossesses autos to support herself and her four-year-old son Tyler. While taking back a BMW she finds 32-year-old Daniel Panterro in the trunk with a gun shot wound in the thigh. Within seconds of encountering Panterro, Jones is knocked unconscious by an unsavory thug and thrown in the trunk with Panterro.
Panterro is in the witness protection program and has been found by the nefarious soul he crossed, Army Veith. Veith and his hoodlum crew are taking Jones and Panterro to the outskirts of town to kill them both. Jones was simple in the wrong place at the wrong time. This all happens in the first 18 pages of the book.
Jones and Panterro manage to escape from the killers. Conflict continues to mount when Veith and his men find Jone's house with the intent to kidnap her son Tyler. Jones, her son and Panterro manage to get in the protective custody of the FBI.
Is someone in the FBI tipping off Veith to help kill Panterro? Can Panterro get into a serious relationship with Jones, thus putting her and her sons life is jeopardy? Who and how many innocent people are killed by Veith and his gangsters? What twists are harbored in this story? Read the book if you want to find out.
The middle of the novel tends to be sluggish and boring until the sexual tension of Jones and Panterro kicks in. The simple facts are there. Panterro is an intelligent, suave and buff gentleman. Jones is tough yet sensitive, smart and a natural beauty with hips that sway in the dirty dreams of men. The emotional and physical attraction these two feel for each other is “Romeo and Juliet” style all the way. Panterro knows if he makes Jones his lover, Veith and his depraved crew will kill her and her son given any chance.
To experience cerebral and physical love the two must overcome a sea of obstacles as big as the national debt. "Shiver" is romantic without being hokey and action packed without being ridiculous.